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editI have posted on User talk:Antichelton, but got no response. Unless there is a response, I will make the following changes:
"exhibiting internationally" - delete from lead per WP:WEASEL. It means nothing. Someone who puts a doodle in a French cafe has exhibited internationally. We stick to the hard facts and let the read make their own interpretations of those facts. If the artist has exhibited internationally in a significant way, then a list of the museums etc makes that point properly.
"range of media" - delete. That is an editorial interpretation per WP:NOR. State the media and let the reader assess the range for themselves.
"Combines the strategies of conceptualism etc". Unnecessary verbiage. It "combines conceptualism etc" says the same thing more clearly.
Also I will reinstate in the lead that he is "associated with the Young British Artists. Antichelton added Chodzko's name to the YBA article, then deleted it from the lead. You can't have it both ways. This is important information for the reader to be able to place Chodzko in the art spectrum.