Talk:445th Operations Group
Latest comment: 14 years ago by Petebutt in topic Possible improvements
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Possible improvements
editI have assessed this article as a Start class article for the Military History project. I believe that it could be improved by addressing the following:
- Referencing: adding in line citations (at least one per paragraph or block of information for a B class rating);
- Coverage: expanding the Modern era section to discuss recent and current operations in more detail;
- Grammar: not too bad overall, but the writing has a bit of a clipped style that could do with a tweak, e.g. "Participated in various contingency and humanitarian operations and training exercises. Also tested the laser detection and ranging (LADAR) system."
I hope this helps. With a few slight improvements I feel it could be a B class article. When you are ready for re-assessment, please add it to the list at WP:MHA. Cheers. — AustralianRupert (talk) 04:55, 12 July 2009 (UTC)
- OK, the grammar is a bit clipped, but that is what you will get from our colonial cousins. It isn't bad enough not to warrant a 'y' though, IMHO, so I have upgraded the assessment.Petebutt (talk) 07:47, 20 June 2010 (UTC)