Talk:1973 Concorde eclipse flight

Latest comment: 7 months ago by Launchballer in topic Did you know nomination

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The result was: promoted by Launchballer talk 10:39, 18 May 2024 (UTC)Reply

Created by Samsmachado (talk).

Number of QPQs required: 0. Nominator has less than 5 past nominations.

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Samsmachado (talk) 00:46, 29 April 2024 (UTC).Reply

  •   The article was nominated within the time scale and is long enough. Earwig suggests no copyright violation—a short quotation is properly attributed. The image is PD. QPQ stands at 4—not required. All references to which I have access check out, except "The Concorde's 74 minutes of totality remains the longest total eclipse observation." I couldn't find this in Hatherill (but it may be in Pappalardo, which I have taken on trust). Pappalardo is also the attribution for both hooks, so assuming GF. The "hold" may be quickly disposed of if Hatherill isn't used for "longest flight"

This is only my second DYK review—oversight welcome. --AntientNestor (talk) 16:03, 29 April 2024 (UTC)Reply

I have removed the Hatherill for longest flight. I did add a 2010 Wired article instead to try and back it up with a source that wasn't paywalled. (Grossman: "The longest totality ever observed by an experimental aircraft was 74 minutes, captured by a supersonic Concorde aircraft in 1973. .") Samsmachado (talk) 21:38, 1 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
I did just go through this with Earwig, and actually there are a couple of phrases that need changing.--Launchballer 11:53, 30 April 2024 (UTC)Reply
I just tweaked some of the phrases Earwig flagged. Mostly it's picking out attributed quotations and a few things that I would call broadly 'terms', in the sense that they can't really be re-worded because that's just what they are (ie. "four twin-spool Olympus 593 engines", " oxygen atoms in the Earth's atmosphere", "the path of a total solar eclipse"). Launchballer, if you have any specific concerns within those, please flag them. Samsmachado (talk) 21:36, 1 May 2024 (UTC)Reply
  New reference supplied to replace Hatherill. The close wording of some phrases used in the article do not constitute copyvios. AGF with the sources, All set.--AntientNestor (talk) 09:03, 18 May 2024 (UTC)Reply