Talk:1920 Muncie Flyers season
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 03:05, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman 03:05, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
Here are the issues I found:
- "the Flyers had to play the rest of the season's game versus local, Indianian teams" I'd just say local teams, sounds a bit better.
- Okay, fixed.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 17:49, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Okay, fixed.
- "No player from the 1920 Muncie Flyers were listed" no players or was listed
- Fixed.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 17:49, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed.
- " Since there was no rules" were no
- Fixed.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 17:49, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed.
- "This was the first match between two APFA teams." both in the lead and later on, this is stated as one of the first. This sentence can probably be removed anyway since it ended up a bit repetitive.
- Alright, I removed it.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 17:49, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Alright, I removed it.
- "Ursella scored kicked a 25-yard field goal, " huh? reword.
- Oops. Removed
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 17:49, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Oops. Removed
- "Waddy Kuehl scored 7-yard " scored a
- Use Cooney Checkaye's full name and link on first mention. It's linked at the second Gas City game when it should be in the first. Also rename all the Checkeyes to Checkaye.
- Fixed.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 17:49, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed.
- "both Mucnie teams" Muncie
- Fixed.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 17:49, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed.
- "Weaver of the Tigers" Full name? Double check all single-names and make sure a full name is listed in the article where possible.
- The source doesn't say the full name, and there are no rosters for non-APFA teams. How should I go about this?
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 22:30, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- The source doesn't say the full name, and there are no rosters for non-APFA teams. How should I go about this?
- "could not content for the" contend
- Fixed.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 22:30, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed.
- "but no single player from the Flyers were on" was
- Fixed.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 17:49, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Fixed.
- Do a copyedit as well, prose is a bit on the sloppy side.
- Did a little bit of c/e'ing.
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 22:30, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Did a little bit of c/e'ing.
I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman 04:09, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
I appreciate all the comments and thank you for the review of this article!
—Michael Jester (talk · contribs) 22:30, 25 November 2012 (UTC)
- Everything looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman 02:20, 26 November 2012 (UTC)