Draft talk:Annick Kayitesi-Jozan

What's wrong?

SafariScribe, you declined this draft as (i) "not adequately supported by reliable sources", and (ii) having references that "do not show significant coverage (not just passing mentions) about the subject in published, reliable, secondary sources that are independent of the subject". Let's start by looking at (ii). I'd have thought that the article in Libération and the review in Afrique contemporaine would be enough to put her there. (Perhaps the other cited sources would too, but I haven't bothered to look at them.) But perhaps I'm missing something. Please add a comment, so that PinkVelvetCake and I will better understand the deficiencies of the draft. Thanks. -- Hoary (talk) 22:17, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Being a survivor of a genocide is not enough for s standalone article. Ask a BLP, most of the contents aren't sourced including the award that can help notability vis WP:ANYBIO.. She wrote two books and it doesn't meet WP: NAUTHOR. Merging and redirecting is my temporal suggestion.Thanks. Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 05:02, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

Being a survivor of a genocide is indeed not "notability". But this particular survivor has written about the experience, and her writing has been noted (even in English). The award was indeed not referenced; now it is. "[M]ost of the contents aren't sourced": Really? (Are you and I perhaps looking at different drafts?) -- Hoary (talk) 12:16, 27 June 2024 (UTC)

PinkVelvetCake, more for you to read, digest, employ: Catherine Gilbert, "Writing as reconciliation: Bearing witness to life after genocide" (doi:10.3828/liverpool/9781786941992.003.0009); and Émilie Sevrain, "Récits des témoins rwandais : des procédés de légitimation littéraires à la réception critique des mass-médias". -- Hoary (talk) 11:28, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Thanks, I'll check it out when I have some time :-) PinkVelvetCake (talk) 13:01, 30 June 2024 (UTC)

Raphaël Jozan

PinkVelvetCake, this draft is about AKJ, not her husband, but I'm surprised by: "She has [...] a daughter by a Frenchman, her husband, publisher Raphaël Jozan. Since 2015, she has lived in Uzbekistan, where her husband heads the French Development Agency (AFD)." I suppose it's conceivable that a publisher would head the Uzbekistan outpost of AFD ... but is this correct? (This suggests otherwise.) -- Hoary (talk) 22:51, 1 July 2024 (UTC)