Wikipedia talk:Requests for mediation/Islamophobia/Criticism

Discussion

For those not in the know, the mediation session for the Islamophobia article has thus far resulted in a proposed rewrite of the "criticism" section, which is attached to this discussion page. Is it good? Is this rewrite neutral and all the other things you'd want in an article section? MessedRocker (talk) (write this article) 00:46, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

Looks like it's walking a nice tight line between the two. But, not knowing the history of the article or previous objections, the value of my opinion might be limited. Keep up the good work!Phyesalis (talk) 06:57, 17 November 2007 (UTC)