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00:00, 8 June 2023 review of submission by 23Doug

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Why did this get banned. Everything here is factual. The team is in fact in production, and is attempting to join the league. 23Doug (talk) 00:00, 8 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You have zero independent reliable sources that discuss this alleged team. Anyone can say they are a hockey team and want to join the NHL, but are sources discussing it? 331dot (talk) 00:59, 8 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

13:18, 8 June 2023 review of submission by Ankur singh03

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Based on your feedback, I understand that the article may have contained promotional content. I apologize for any promotional language that may have inadvertently made its way into the article. I assure you that my intention is to provide an objective and encyclopedic overview of UnknwnAayush and his YouTube channel. To rectify this, I plan to revise the article by focusing on providing factual information supported by reliable and independent sources. I will avoid using subjective or promotional language, instead presenting the channel's content and its creator's achievements in a neutral tone. Ankur singh03 (talk) 13:18, 8 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Your draft was rejected, meaning that it will not be considered further. 331dot (talk) 13:24, 8 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]