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00:42:27, 28 July 2019 review of submission by JuniperSprings

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JuniperSprings (talk) 00:42, 28 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Hello, I would like to ask if anyone could help me make my article look less "like an advertisement" which it's not. I pulled from various interviews and other published materials.

https://en.wiki.x.io/wiki/Draft:BevVeg_International_--_Vegan_Certification#BevVeg_International_--_Vegan_Certification_%28new_section%29

08:19:17, 28 July 2019 review of submission by Aumora

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Hello! can someone help me? I'm waiting for more than 2 and a half months for a second review for my draft Draft:Daniel S. Milo. I need help because TheRoadIsLong does not answer me anymore. Please, I think I did good Job and the Draft is appropriate for being an article. Thanks a lot, Aumora (talk) 08:19, 28 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

You have not edited since May, I'm not sure what you are accusing me of? I replied to your comment with "I will leave it to another reviewer to take a look". Please be patient. Theroadislong (talk) 08:55, 28 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

12:30:39, 28 July 2019 review of submission by Romylynmalacadrosel

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Romylynmalacadrosel (talk) 12:30, 28 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Romylynmalacadrosel Your draft appears to have been copied from Facebook, it gives no indication whatsoever as to why the person might be notable enough for an article, hence the reason for rejection. Theroadislong (talk) 13:13, 28 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

18:03:16, 28 July 2019 review of draft by 2600:1700:93B0:1350:C72:10CE:BF8B:F5A6

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Can you please help?

2600:1700:93B0:1350:C72:10CE:BF8B:F5A6 (talk) 18:03, 28 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]

What sort of advice are you looking for? The article was declined because it does not have sufficient sourcing. As the reviewer stated, it is too soon to create a separate article for an unreleased game. It will most likely not receive in-depth coverage until media reviews it. However, even so, it likely makes more editorial sense to include this content in a section in Super Monkey Ball: Banana Blitz. —  HELLKNOWZ   ▎TALK 19:49, 29 July 2019 (UTC)[reply]