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Real Madrid C.F.

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I think the article is good enough to be a featured article.Saudi9999 06:45, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

And what exactly is the point in just saying that. One example why it isn't: "The club won the European Cup for a sixth time in 1966 defeating Partizan Belgrade 2–1 in the final with a team composed entirely of nationally-born players, a first in the competition". Not properly punctuated. And I am presuming you have read the Featured article criteria? Mattythewhite 09:57, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
And please take a look at my comments on the previous PR. Mattythewhite 18:44, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Angelo

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A short introduction: this place is not for discussing about featured article, but for requesting a peer review to this article. Here is my PR, in any case.

Use stadiums rather than stadia;
  Done renamed. Saudi9999 03:38, 8 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Some parts of the article refers to the team using they, some others use it. So, be consistent and use only one of them (I'd suggest the former).
The crest collection's picture looks like a derivative work featuring copyrighted logos (which are usually not allowed to be used in derivative works). I am unsure about its validity in the Wikipedia.
Be consistent also with the season notation: use solely 2007–08 rather than 07/08, for instance.
  Done Saudi9999 03:38, 8 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Real's kit is currently manufactured by Adidas, which is contracted to supply the club's kit since 1998. Can you please source this?
  Done Saudi9999 03:38, 8 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Source also the team captaincies.
  Done removed. Saudi9999 03:38, 8 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Bernd Schuster's picture smells like copyvio. I will have a look at that very soon in any case.
  Done removed. Saudi9999 03:38, 8 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
Format foreign words such as "socios" in italics.
  Done Saudi9999 03:38, 8 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Here's all. I hope my suggestion are useful for you. --Angelo 18:41, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

About Schuster's photo, I was right: it's taken from sport.es, and is therefore a copyvio, so I deleted it. --Angelo 21:33, 7 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]
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