Wikipedia:Peer review/Pauline Green/archive1

I've listed this article for peer review because it was a stub when I started, and I've expanded and referenced but now I've gone blind on it: any other views on required changes to meet wiki guidelines greatly appreciated.


Thanks,

JonStrines 08:42, 26 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Cheers for that: will work my way through the suggestions. JonStrines 09:32, 30 October 2007 (UTC)[reply]