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Money in the Bank (2018)

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I've listed this article for peer review because I wish to take it to GA status. It will be my first attempt at taking a Professional Wrestling article to GA. Constructive comments and feedback are most welcome. Thanks. — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 10:31, 10 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

A lot of the information about the match relies upon "Pro Wrestling Dot Net." Are there other sources that can verify the information, too?

Added Wrestleview's article to the match info. — Ssven2 ^{Looking at you, kid} 08:05, 20 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The paragraphs in the Reception section are quite long. Any way to split them up?
Reception section falls into the "X says Y" pattern. I suggest reading WP:RECEPTION and organising the section into categories like performance, technical ability, etc.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 15:03, 15 June 2023 (UTC)[reply]