This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because the author wishes feedback on how to improve the article.
Thanks, Tim Vickers (talk) 16:52, 28 March 2008 (UTC)
- Comments from The Rambling Man (talk · contribs)
- Don't put spaces between punctuation and citations per WP:CITE (e.g. [1]).
- Don't overcapitalise the headings per WP:HEAD (so "Mesh Currents and Essential Meshes" should be "Mesh currents and essential meshes"). This should be reflected in the captions.
- Explain the abbreviations in the captions, R1, Vs etc.
- What's a "planar circuit"?
- Explain the currents i1 etc in figure 2.
- I think the lead needs to be expanded to clarify what the article is about for non-experts.
Hope that helps. The Rambling Man (talk) 07:51, 31 March 2008 (UTC)