Wikipedia:Peer review/List of bridges in Montreal/archive1

List of bridges in Montreal

• A script has been used to generate a semi-automated review of the article for issues relating to grammar and house style; it can be found on the automated peer review page for July 2009.

This peer review discussion has been closed.
I've listed this article for peer review because I want to know what still needs to be done to get this listed as a Featured List. Pictures of the three east-end bridges and the tunnel will be added as soon as the weather allows me to take good pictures.

Thanks,  Blanchardb -^{Me•MyEars•MyMouth}- timed 19:10, 1 July 2009 (UTC)

• Comments
  • Avoid stating the obvious, i.e. the very first sentence re-states the title of the page
  • Avoid bolded links, i.e. Bridge
  • WP:LEAD section should be expanded. It's too short now.
  • Create a new section titled Key and list what the colors mean.
  • Also, WP:COLOR should not be the only indicator, try using symbols along with the colors.
  • A section heading should not be inside of the table, take all three out.
  • There should be no links in those section titles.
  • There should be a lot more references than what you have now.
  • References should be cited with complete info, i.e. publisher, date of publishing, access date.
  • All the comments in the table should be cited separately.

--Crzycheetah 02:16, 10 July 2009 (UTC)