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List of New Orleans Hornets head coaches

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I've listed this article for peer review because it currently does not have enough entries to to promoted to featured list material. This peer review is mandatory for this article because of featured topic criteria 3c.

Thanks, -- [[SRE.K.A.L.|L.A.K.ERS]] 07:02, 21 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Dabomb87 (talk · contribs)

"The New Orleans Hornets are an American professional basketball team based in New Orleans, Louisiana. The Hornets play"-->The New Orleans Hornets are an American professional basketball team based in New Orleans, Louisiana. They play
"New Orleans/Oklahoma City Hornets (2005–2007)" The slash (/) should have spaces on either side because the separated items have internal spaces.
"The Hornets have never been in the NBA Finals since its inception." "been to" sounds better here.
"The team have played "-->The team has played
"Dave Cowens is the franchise's all-time leader for the highest winning percentage in the regular-season (.609)." Seems like this should go before the info about the playoffs.
"Though none of the Hornets coaches have been elected "-->Although no Hornets coache has been elected
File:ByronScottPanathinaikos1998.jpg—I highly doubt that the licensing is correct; the picture quality is too crisp and lack of metadata makes me suspicious. Dabomb87 (talk) 23:27, 25 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Done all. -- [[SRE.K.A.L.|L.A.K.ERS]] 03:00, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

Comment - looks good, just some minor points

Move Dave Cowens' image to the top
Ref 7: the file format is PDF, not pdf
It would be nice if you can create a stub for Gary Chouest. But this is not mandatory

Done all except for the last one. Too lazy, too busy, sorry. -- [[SRE.K.A.L.|L.A.K.ERS]] 05:50, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]

—Chris! _ct 05:46, 26 February 2009 (UTC)[reply]