Wikipedia:Peer review/History of the battery/archive1

Suggestions: Introduction should be longer; needs more citations (roughly one per paragraph); more technical terms need to be linked, such as electrochemical and Lead-acid battery; citations should follow punctuation (e.g. .[6]); some lengthy paragraphs need to be sub-divided. Thanks. — RJH (talk) 16:32, 17 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, APR _t 21:19, 17 January 2007 (UTC)[reply]