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Air source heat pump

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I've listed this article for peer review because I am thinking of nominating it for good article. People thinking of buying one may like to read an unbiased introduction and background info before talking to salespeople.

Thanks, Chidgk1 (talk) 13:28, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

The text starting "used to provide interior space heating and cooling even in colder climates, and can be used efficiently for water heating in milder climates ...." was added in 2011 so may not be a copyvio of https://myecogrant.co.uk/airsource-heat-pump as Wayback machine only shows that back to 2021. Chidgk1 (talk) 14:16, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Comments from Z1720

Comments after a quick skim:

This article needs a lot more inline citations. There should be an inline citation at the end of every paragraph, minimum.
The lede should include information from all parts of the article: some sections seem to be missing from the lede.
Likewise, there is some information in the lede that does not seem to be in the article. WP:LEDE has more information on what a lede should look like.

I hope this helps. Z1720 (talk) 16:54, 16 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]