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The list was promoted by PresN via FACBot (talk) 00:25, 8 April 2024 (UTC) [1].[reply]
List of constituencies of the Mizoram Legislative Assembly (edit | talk | history | protect | delete | links | watch | logs | views)
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- Nominator(s): -MPGuy2824 (talk) 04:32, 19 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I've brought this list up to the standard of the Tripura FL. Criticisms and suggestions for improvement are welcome. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 04:32, 19 February 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Dylan620
I'm going to take a closer look at this in the coming days. I do have a couple comments for now:
and the Constitution lays down the general principles of positive discrimination for STs.[4][2]: 35, 137
– it seems a little odd that ref 4 appears before ref 2 here.Mizoram was converted into a state, and the number of constituencies for its legislative assembly was increased to 40.
– this should be directly followed by a source to back it up, especially since it's at the end of a paragraph.
Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 22:56, 2 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed these two. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 04:24, 3 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you MPGuy2824. I have some more feedback:
- The prose is generally well-written, but I see a couple incomplete sentences in the first table and would like for those to be fleshed out a bit.
- Done
The 2011 census of India stated that indigenous population constitute 95% of the state's total population.
– mixed verb tenses here.- Fixed
- Images need alt text.
- Fixed
- I am completely unable to access ref 23, which is the source for an entire column of data in the second table :/
- I've added an accessible ref for each row now.
- It may be worth mentioning that while the legislature to make Mizoram a state was passed in 1986, the statehood was not effected until 1987.
- Done
- In order to maintain consistency with the other refs, the websites and/or publishers should be wikilinked (if possible) in refs 1, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 (which is missing these inputs), 9, 10, and 11 (ditto).
- Fixed
- Refs 7 and 11 have date formats which are inconsistent with the rest of the refs. You may wish to consider adding {{use dmy dates|date=March 2024}} to the top of the page.
- Done
- In ref 2, I'm not sure if "Legislative Department" should be in italics.
- Fixed
- In ref 1, the "live" URL redirects to a directory of legislative assemblies in India.
- Changed the reference
- The article states that the assembly is elected in five-year intervals, and that is indeed the case from 1993 onward, but election intervals before then seem to be irregular. Is there a way this could be explained?
- Info added to lead. Tell me if you think it makes more sense to move the text to the History section.
- On a less critical note, the sources that I successfully checked did verify the information they were used to cite.
- The prose is generally well-written, but I see a couple incomplete sentences in the first table and would like for those to be fleshed out a bit.
- That's what I've got for now. You've done a great job here, but I'm not yet at the point where I would feel comfortable supporting. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 20:55, 6 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Replies inline, but I think that all the points that you brought up have been fixed now. Thanks for the thorough review. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 06:31, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Yes, that's much better! Thank you for addressing my concerns. Support. Dylan620 (he/him • talk • edits) 21:01, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Replies inline, but I think that all the points that you brought up have been fixed now. Thanks for the thorough review. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 06:31, 7 March 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Thank you MPGuy2824. I have some more feedback:
Pseud 14
edit- This leads to either President's Rule being imposed -- leads to either the President's Rule
- the Scheduled Tribes (ST) (along with the Scheduled Castes) -- I would remove the second parenthetical and just include it as part of the prose.
- That's all I have. Pseud 14 (talk) 21:11, 5 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- @Pseud 14: Fixed both. Thanks for the review. -MPGuy2824 (talk) 06:12, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
- Support. Pseud 14 (talk) 12:54, 6 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Source review passed; promoted. --PresN 15:34, 7 April 2024 (UTC)[reply]
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