Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Woodrow Wilson/archive1
Very detailed and well written. --Flockofpidgeons
- Object. 1) Lead section gives no summary. 2) References should be sorted out. Currently only two "what happened on this day" articles and one 1992 newspaper article. More references are mentioned in the article, list them here as well. 3) "Political career" is ridiculously short. 4) The "misc facts" section should be removed. Already most facts are incorporated in the article, so should the rest. Jeronimo 08:34, 14 Feb 2005 (UTC)
- Object. What Jeronimo wrote, plus consider moving the quotes to Wikiquote and bottom pic needs a caption. --Piotr Konieczny aka Prokonsul Piotrus Talk 19:16, 15 Feb 2005 (UTC)
- Object - Follow the suggested procedure: get it first in Peer Review. You'll get good pointers how to improve the article before submitting to FA.--Zappaz 03:59, 19 Feb 2005 (UTC)