Wikipedia:Featured article candidates/Leonard W. Murray/archive1

The following is an archived discussion of a featured article nomination. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in Wikipedia talk:Featured article candidates. No further edits should be made to this page.

The article was archived by Hog Farm via FACBot (talk) 13 February 2023 [1].


Nominator(s): Friendofleonard (talk) 03:30, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

This article is about a significant Canadian military figure, the only Canadian to command a theatre of war in WW1 or WW2. Admiral Murray was C-in-C North Atlantic, and widely regarded as the architect of the convoy system during the key years of the Battle of the Atlantic. There is a linked date - the FA could be published on 8 May 2023, the anniversary of the Battle of the Atlantic. Friendofleonard (talk) 03:30, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

  • I’m going to drop in a procedural oppose on this (for the moment, at least), as you opened a PR an hour ago, and you should only have one process open. A quick glance suggests you should withdraw this and keep the PR open. The lead is too short and there are a few MOS breaches I can see from a quick glance, which the PR should sort before it is returned here. - SchroCat (talk) 03:58, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]
  • I concur - suggest withdrawal for the moment, let the PR run instead. Nikkimaria (talk) 04:00, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

Archiving per above, let this finish it's peer review before FAC. Hog Farm Talk 04:37, 13 February 2023 (UTC)[reply]

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