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This page consists of entries that have been addressed and cleaned up, or are over one year old.

Expired entries

November 2023

• Girl Scouts of the USA - needs promotional and unencyclopedic tone removed. Sangsangaplaz (talk) 03:35, 21 November 2023 (UTC)
• Rifts (role-playing game) - tagged for cleanup since June 2022. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
• Serenity Role Playing Game - tagged for cleanup since July 2020. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
• Sword and sorcery - tagged for cleanup since June 2021. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
• Tabletop role-playing games in Japan - tagged for cleanup since May 2015. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
• The Dark Eye: Chains of Satinav - tagged for cleanup since August 2022. BOZ (talk) 06:58, 6 November 2023 (UTC)
• Balanced anesthesia - Feels(/felt) machine translated. I did as much c/e as I could but there are still parts I don't know what they're trying to say. Kimen8 (talk) 15:56, 1 November 2023 (UTC)

Addressed entries

• Sartù di riso – source n. 1 has problems. JacktheBrown (talk) 09:41, 12 October 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed by 00101984hjw (talk) 01:57, 15 October 2024 (UTC)

  @00101984hjw: thank you. JacktheBrown (talk) 22:31, 17 October 2024 (UTC)

• Cynthia Rothrock - filmography should be in tables. Lacon432 (talk) 09:16, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed I re-formatted the rest of the list items into the existing table. Junemoon19 (talk) 20:05, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

• Michael Berryman - filmography should be in tables. Lacon432 (talk) 03:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed Junemoon19 (talk) 20:37, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

• Wayne Grayson - filmography should be in tables. Lacon432 (talk) 03:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed I tried my best finding the correct dates and abiding with WP:Filmography. Junemoon19 (talk) 18:34, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

• Tom Wayland - filmography should be in tables. Lacon432 (talk) 03:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed using existing information. – Daℤyzzos (✉️ • 📤) 23:06, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

• Bill Timoney - filmography should be in tables. Lacon432 (talk) 03:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed re-formatted list items into tables Junemoon19 (talk) 20:00, 30 October 2024 (UTC)

• Don Wilson (kickboxer) - filmography should be separated by film, television, etc. Lacon432 (talk) 03:14, 7 October 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed Junemoon19 (talk) 21:00, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

• Quyen Tran - filmography is backwards in dates of release. Lacon432 (talk) 09:24, 2 October 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed Junemoon19 (talk) 19:45, 24 October 2024 (UTC)

• Gabbart - Article is a disorganized recitation of facts and a quotation, with no narrative flow. Mdnavman (talk) 16:20, 1 October 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed - I tried my best on speculating what "Source from 1877:" may mean but I did fix the issue - 00101984hjw (talk) 04:49, 4 October 2024 (UTC)

• Shannon Chan-Kent - filmography needs to be fixed and set in tables for organizational purposes. Lacon432 (talk) 17:23, 4 February 2024 (UTC)

   Done - I organized the filmography into tables. However, it'd be real nice if someone could continue filling out the years and the refs. 00101984hjw (talk) 04:46, 27 September 2024 (UTC)

• List of Italian foods and drinks – "Lang and lang-xx template errors $2". JacktheBrown (talk) 19:14, 28 November 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed by 00101984hjw (talk) 07:34, 30 November 2024 (UTC)

  @00101984hjw: thank you. JacktheBrown (talk) 22:55, 1 December 2024 (UTC)

• International Men's Day – source n. 97 has problems. JacktheBrown (talk) 18:12, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

   Done: deleted section with said source per WP:SPS & WP:TOOMUCH - 00101984hjw (talk) 22:41, 25 November 2024 (UTC)

  @00101984hjw: thank you. JacktheBrown (talk) 22:56, 1 December 2024 (UTC)

• Parachute Training Center: Edwards AFB Jump Tower - bare URLs in references. Tinton5 (talk) 23:31, 21 November 2024 (UTC)

   Done by 00101984hjw (talk) 02:45, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

• China and the Russian invasion of Ukraine – source n. 44 has problems. JacktheBrown (talk) 02:30, 20 November 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed by 00101984hjw (talk) 02:29, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

  @00101984hjw: thank you. JacktheBrown (talk) 21:10, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

• Human rights in Russia – sources n. 3, 22 and 68 have problems. JacktheBrown (talk) 23:00, 11 November 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed by Daℤyzzos (✉️ • 📤), 00:07, 12 November 2024 (UTC)

  @DaZyzzogetonsGotDaLastWord: thank you. JacktheBrown (talk) 05:01, 12 November 2024 (UTC)

  You're welcome! – Daℤyzzos (✉️ • 📤) 22:28, 12 November 2024 (UTC)

• Land of Israel – source n. 40 has problems. JacktheBrown (talk) 13:30, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed by Daℤyzzos (✉️ • 📤), 17:46, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

  @DaZyzzogetonsGotDaLastWord: thank you. JacktheBrown (talk) 05:01, 12 November 2024 (UTC)

  You're welcome! – Daℤyzzos (✉️ • 📤) 22:29, 12 November 2024 (UTC)

• Pizza – source n. 27: "permanent dead link". JacktheBrown (talk) 00:05, 9 November 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed by Daℤyzzos (✉️ • 📤), 14:31, 9 November 2024 (UTC)

  @DaZyzzogetonsGotDaLastWord: thank you. JacktheBrown (talk) 13:33, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

  You're welcome! – Daℤyzzos (✉️ • 📤) 16:46, 10 November 2024 (UTC)

• Spaghetti alla siracusana – source n. 5 has problems. JacktheBrown (talk) 20:23, 7 November 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed. Had to use Google translate to pinpoint the source text but I think I solved the issue. -- 00101984hjw (talk) 01:47, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

   Note: source is in Italian (according to Google Translate). – Daℤyzzos (✉️ • 📤)

• Gerard Gertoux - already flagged for various cleanup tasks, but no-one appears so far to have had the appetite to clean it. 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 08:39, 1 November 2024 (UTC)

   Comment: article may require expertise on biblical/linguistic subjects to improve. I suggest starting an RfC. -- 00101984hjw (talk) 05:56, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

   Question: @00101984hjw How would you phrase the RFC? While I am happy to do it I was hoping for expertise from this project to give guidance on the talk page, ideally direct editing input. 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 15:24, 7 November 2024 (UTC)

   Partly done - grateful for advice received from 00101984hjw. I think the heavy lifting is now done, but some attention from fresh eyes would be truly beneficial, please. 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 18:07, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

  Deeper analysis has led me to send it to Wikipedia:Articles for deletion/Gerard Gertoux after considering that my AFC acceptance of this was a good faith error. Opinions one way or the other are welcome. I will leave it to a project member to decide whether to strike this from the project list. 🇺🇦 Fiddle^Timtrent Faddle^Talk to me 🇺🇦 18:13, 8 November 2024 (UTC)

   On hold until AFD resolved: request will certainly be struck if article is deleted, but will be relevant again if article remains up. (Not striking yet.) – Daℤyzzos (✉️ • 📤) _{No need to ping} 14:25, 9 November 2024 (UTC)

  AFD resolved: striking request - 00101984hjw (talk) 02:48, 22 November 2024 (UTC)

• Tim Sheehy (businessman) - bare URL/clean up needed in references. Tinton5 (talk) 22:52, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

   Done by 00101984hjw (talk) 00:18, 4 November 2024 (UTC)

• Edward Verso - bare URL in references. Tinton5 (talk) 03:09, 3 November 2024 (UTC)

   Fixed by 00101984hjw (talk) 05:29, 3 November 2024 (UTC)