StephaneTolland

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Thanks for your edit to Vijay Seshadri

Thank you for helping to improve this article. I hope you enjoy working here and will continue contributing. However, the real improvement you made left a glaring problem—later on in the same graf, the sentence appeared:

Seshadri had intended for "The Disappearances" to personalise loss having described himself as initially too shocked to write poetry in the wake of the attacks.

This is in contradiction to your correct edit, and needed to also be fixed. This illustrates one aspect of working on Wikipedia, the encyclopedia anyone can edit. It can happen that the article you come to improve may have errors. Evidently the editor that added the green sentence quoted above conflated or misread sources and left in an accurate impression. At a minimum, I try to read at least the entire paragraph or section to be sure that what I add is not only correct, but that it works with the whole graf or section.

The article stills needs additional well-sourced critical analysis—please feel free to jump in, specially at the graf I made a stab at.

Again, welcome to Wikipedia. — Neorange (Phil) 03:06, 21 November 2017 (UTC)