Rivera.joel3
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editHello, Rivera.joel3, and welcome to Wikipedia! My name is Ian and I work with Wiki Education; I help support students who are editing as part of a class assignment.
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If you have any questions, please don't hesitate to contact me on my talk page. Ian (Wiki Ed) (talk) 16:21, 18 October 2022 (UTC)
Peer Review
editYour lead is good, your content is okay, and your tone is neutral, so your edits so far are good. A couple of suggestions to improve your article, though, would be to expand more on the plot by adding a brief summary to all the acts in the play and format them the same way. For instance, for act one, it is in paragraph format but for act two, it is in a bullet format, so make sure to edit that to be structured in the same format. I would also finish adding short descriptions to the characters in the play to give a better understanding of who they are. Another suggestion is to add more themes you have found in the play under the theme section and maybe list the themes so that it is easier to read. Finally, I would also encourage you to add more references if you have found scholarly ones relatable to your work. Overall, great job! Yxrivm (talk) 19:37, 29 November 2022 (UTC)Yxrivm (talk) 19:37, 29 November 2022 (UTC)
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editSo far you’re doing pretty good on your article all your additions have been good. Some suggestions to improve your article. My first is to finish adding details to the characters missing any information. Also, you can add pagebreaks between sections, which woud add some uniformity and make the article visually look better. One place where the lack of them is very apparent is inbetween the lead and the plot sections the page looks very cluttered. You also could add some uniformity to the plot section by either choosing to keep it all paragraphs or all bullet points. Some other suggestions are adding a composition section if possible about the conception of the play. And a section on the production history of the play.
Other than those suggestions I don’t really have any criticisms of what you have added. I’m sure you have stuff planned for the article but these are just my suggestions to further improve it. Overall, good job. Joerogansavedmylife (talk) 18:30, 1 December 2022 (UTC)
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