Pshla619
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This is a biased edit below because you took out valuable facts about the Angels fan appreciation and attendance for no good reason. There was facts stated and also a nice introduction to how the sections tone should be written and directed for people who have no clue about this, like you!
"Angels are not known for loyal fans. Yankees, Dodgers, Red Sox, Cubs, Cardinals have loyal fans. And the Dodgers are not "closer to L.A." The Dodgers play in L.A.)" <---How does this have anything to do with an encyclopedia edit? This is all opinion!
And if you listened to the section written you would understand that i was explaining that the Dodgers have a location closer to L.A. than the Angels do. It wasn't anything about they play in LA or they don't.
"shown through the teams great fan following seen in the following section...they have drawn 3 million plus fans to the stadium for eight years straight"
Above is an example of what you took out which was an intro to the fan appreciation section merely stating that it "can be" seen that the Angels have a loyal fan presence in the following stated facts about achievements by the Angels. What a reader will get from this is stats that can let the reader see ballpark figures of fan appreciation, should i put comparable stats of other ballparks to make it seem less opinionated?