PaulJackson12

David Arkenstone

Hi. First, thanks for your additions to this article. You added a lot of text, and I'm going to go through and edit it down so it conforms to Wiki's biography criteria. We have guidelines here about reliable sourcing, so I'm going to look at that too. I also see that you removed the infobox from the top, and some other Wiki links and categories from the bottom. In the future, please try to keep those intact. Thanks. — HelloAnnyong ^{(say whaaat?!)} 23:28, 17 August 2008 (UTC)

Okay, now that I've had a chance to look at some of the material you added: there's a lot of repetition with this text and other websites. It reads like a press packet release about the artist, or something like that. It's not an original text, I don't believe, so there's some concern of plagiarism here. I'm going to trim down the text considerably so as to remove a number of peacock words, as well as to bring down the general promotional/advertisement tone. — HelloAnnyong ^{(say whaaat?!)} 23:43, 17 August 2008 (UTC)