Nevshupa
Joined 12 July 2011
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Trekphiler in topic It's a gas
It's a gas
editLooking at this, I'd say it's a good start. Delete the two top headers, & add a ==Sources== header below your 1st 'graph. Delete the commas between footnotes (no need). Link the technical terms. The biggest problem appears to be conflict of interest: you appear to be citing yourself... You'd be better off relying on other sources. TREKphiler any time you're ready, Uhura 23:06, 23 July 2011 (UTC)