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Azurashi Peer Review II
editHi Blin1095,
I've added some more comments to your sandbox page. Overall, doing a very good job on cleaning up and re-organizing the sections. Most of my suggestions had to do with wording in sentences and typos that I felt could be changed so that the article flows better. I also commented about how the Impact section seems kinda lacking at the moment. Are there some more obvious reasons why bioprinting is important for society? Perhaps including successful transplants of artificial organs to show that printed organs are an actual viable option for patients nowadays would help to show bioprinting's increasing influence. However, just make sure that it doesn't sound too argumentative.