User talk:Biology Gal/Megakaryocyte–erythroid progenitor cell

Hi!

Hi Biology Gal,

I'm trying to find what section you are currently editing? It looks good, the sources are good and it doesn't look like you have any glaring errors, but is this the only part you've edited thus far? Because the rest underneath seems to be only what you plan to edit or what needs to be edited.

Megakaryocyte/erythrocyte progenitor cells (MEPs), among other blood cells, are generated as a result of hematopoiesis, which occurs in the bone marrow. Hematopoietic stem cells (HSCs) can differentiate into one of two progenitor cells: the common lymphoid progenitor (CLP) and the common myeloid progenitor (CMP). MEPs derive from the common myeloid progenitor lineage.[1] MEPs must commit to becoming either platelet-producing megakaryocytes via megakaryopoiesis or erythrocyte-producing erythroblasts via erythropoiesis.[2][3] Most of the blood cells produced in the bone marrow during hematopoiesis come from MEPs.[4]

I just want to be sure of what I'm looking at :)

Thanks,

Gentle Hamster The Gentle Hamster (talk) 20:15, 31 October 2022 (UTC)

Hello Gentle Hamster!

The part you are referring to is what I have edited so far. I'm sorry for the confusion!

I wanted to add more detail to the limited information provided in the article. Also, under the images already in the articles, I wanted to change/update the captions to be more clear.

Does that help to clarify at all?

Thank you!

Biology Gal Biology Gal (talk) 23:45, 13 November 2022 (UTC)

Hi Biology gal,

Yes, thank you! It looks good, I don't see any editing or citing errors. There's a lot you could edit since the page doesn't have much, but I think you did a good job. I saw your suggestions and yes, I did direct quote, but I thought it was the best route to go since I'm doing definitions. I will be trying to get to another section and in there I will use more prose and less direct quotes. Hopefully, I will have a draft going during the break.

Thanks,

Gentle Hamster The Gentle Hamster (talk) 22:38, 14 November 2022 (UTC)