Asheranderson1202

Your submission at Articles for creation: X7 Max (July 12)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Qcne was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Qcne (talk) 08:33, 12 July 2024 (UTC)

Dear Qcne,

Thank you for taking the time to review the article and provide valuable feedback. I’ve taken care to remove any review-style sections and focused on presenting the product's features and reception from third-party sources. Thank you again for your guidance, and I hope the revised article better meets Wikipedia’s content standards. Asheranderson1202 (talk) 05:26, 27 September 2024 (UTC)

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Your submission at Articles for creation: X7 Max (July 19)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by SafariScribe were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Safari Scribe^{Edits! Talk!} 07:11, 19 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: X7 Max (September 7)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Johannes Maximilian was:  The comment the reviewer left was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Johannes (Talk) (Contribs) (Articles) 09:35, 7 September 2024 (UTC)

Dear Johannes,

Thank you for taking the time to review the article. I appreciate your comments and would like to address the points raised.

1. Neutrality and Advertisement Concerns: I understand that the article may have come across as promotional in nature. In response, I have revised the content to adhere more closely to Wikipedia's neutrality standards. The updated article now focuses on factual information, highlighting the scooter’s design, performance specifications, and third-party reviews. I have also removed any subjective language and ensured the tone remains impartial throughout.
2. Road Legality: Regarding the question of road legality due to the scooter’s top speed, I acknowledge the concern and have refrained from making any claims about its legality in the revised version. I recognize that laws differ across regions, and I will ensure the article does not imply road legality unless backed by region-specific legislation.

Thank you again for your guidance, and I hope the revised article better meets Wikipedia’s content standards. Asheranderson1202 (talk) 05:27, 27 September 2024 (UTC)

Courtesy ping @Johannes Maximilian Qcne (talk) 08:52, 27 September 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: X7 Max (October 23)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Snowman304 was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Snowman304|talk 03:40, 23 October 2024 (UTC)