Aleksandra6617

Your submission at Articles for creation: Andrew Pohorille (July 10)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reason left by Iwaqarhashmi was: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Waqar💬 20:39, 10 July 2024 (UTC)

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Hi Teahouse, thank you for the feedback. I have previously published an article on pl.wikipedia. During the writing of that article, I had a mentor from Wikipedia. Could you be such a mentor and help me make changes? Aleksandra6617 (talk) 11:15, 11 July 2024 (UTC)

Your submission at Articles for creation: sandbox (August 13)

Your recent article submission to Articles for Creation has been reviewed. Unfortunately, it has not been accepted at this time. The reasons left by Bobby Cohn were: Please check the submission for any additional comments left by the reviewer. You are encouraged to edit the submission to address the issues raised and resubmit after they have been resolved.

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Bobby Cohn (talk) 19:10, 13 August 2024 (UTC)

Hi @Bobby Cohn, thank you so much for your comments. I have a huge request for you, would you be able to make a sample quotation and I will make the rest? I will be very grateful Aleksandra6617 (talk) 09:28, 19 August 2024 (UTC)

Hi @Bobby Cohn, could you please check what else I should improve on this article? I'll appreciate it Aleksandra6617 (talk) 12:06, 23 August 2024 (UTC)

Hi Aleksandra6617, I'm not sure I understand your first request. Per my declination reasoning, the article will need additional citations (please address the {{citation needed}} tags), especially as it relates to personal information, pursuant to our WP:BLP policy, and ensure the tone of the article is neutral and not WP:Wikipuffery, some phrasing—such as His other research interests were rather eclectic —he published papers in various in fields ranging from the structure of comets to the mechanism of anesthetic action and risky decision-making—is not very encyclopedic. Bobby Cohn (talk) 14:59, 23 August 2024 (UTC)