Template talk:Did you know/13th Light Bomber Squadron
Latest comment: 13 years ago by Alexikoua
13th Light Bomber Squadron
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The result was: promoted by PanydThe muffin is not subtle
- ... that the 13th Light Bomber Squadron was the first Greek military unit to be formed in exile after the German conquest of Greece in World War II?
- Reviewed: Bruce McLenna
Created by Alexikoua (talk), Cplakidas (talk). Self nom at 05:22, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
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- Length, format, content rules: 2966 characters (467 words). The Cavalry (Message me) 18:30, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
- Source: The Cavalry (Message me) 18:30, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
- Interest: MILHIST ones are always good, and we have a fair few Greek readers. The Cavalry (Message me) 18:30, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
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Hmm. Seems a little similar to http://koti.welho.com/msolanak/13helengl.html - Copyvio: No obvious copyvio apart from the above worry.
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Comments/discussion: Rather amazed at how complex DYK has gotten recently. I have trouble navigating it, so I dread to think what a new user would do. In any case, this article seems fine, but I think it needs to be checked for close paraphrasing of http://koti.welho.com/msolanak/13helengl.html. The Cavalry (Message me) 18:30, 27 July 2011 (UTC)
- I have made some c-e job on the sentences that were similar to similar http://koti.welho.com/msolanak/13helengl.html. Hope we are ok with this issue now.Alexikoua (talk) 08:02, 29 July 2011 (UTC)