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Problems with plot
editThe plot is written in an extremely opinionated way. Any judgements about the events of the plot must be referenced. Only a simple summary (but not too long) of events. without judgements, must be there otherwise. - Altenmann >talk 19:05, 26 September 2023 (UTC)
- Example:
This unexpected incident serves as a foretaste of the following sequence of events
- this is an opinion of a wikipedian. And there are much more of these. Please do not remove the tag from the section. Obviously you don't understand the problem with your writing. - Altenmann >talk 23:38, 26 September 2023 (UTC)- Ok👌 edit the text as you see it. UkNicky (talk) 07:12, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
- I don't have to; I am working with other things. Someone will eventually see my tag and edit it. That's what are tags for. - Altenmann >talk 16:26, 27 September 2023 (UTC)
- Ok👌 edit the text as you see it. UkNicky (talk) 07:12, 27 September 2023 (UTC)