Talk:William George Malone/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 20:13, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

• Put all titles in the References section into title case.

Done. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

• Give the name of the movie.

Done. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

• emigrated to New Zealand to join the Malone brothers to join "them"

Done. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

• Missing word, I think: reinforcements to Chunuk Bair immediately it was captured

Sorted. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)

• No DABs, external links good, pictures appropriately licensed.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:13, 27 March 2013 (UTC)

Thanks for the review, it is greatly appreciated. Cheers. Zawed (talk) 08:16, 29 March 2013 (UTC)