Talk:Wilhelm Heidkamp
Latest comment: 1 year ago by 92.193.146.62 in topic Unfortunate phrasing
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Date of Death
editAccording to both sources in the German article, Heidkamp died 1931, not 1926. (Wilhelm Heidkamp im Leverkusener Anzeiger, Wilhelm Heidkamp mit Bild im Leverkusener Anzeiger). Irmgard (talk) 07:49, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
- I changed it --Otberg (talk) 22:45, 26 November 2012 (UTC)
Unfortunate phrasing
edit"... he would die of consequent lung disease in 1931. After his recovery, Heidkamp continued ..."
I also suggest to mention his heroism in the 1st sentence so that a casual reader wouldn't wonder why that person got dedicated a page. JB. --92.193.146.62 (talk) 02:35, 18 May 2023 (UTC)