Talk:Vilayet Printing House (Sarajevo)/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 14:58, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

I will take this one. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 14:58, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Lead

• Ottoman Empire known as the Tanzimat Better write "Ottoman Empire (known as the Tanzimat)"
• I think vilayet should be in italics throughout the article as it is a foreign word. It should be linked/explained in the lead

Background

• Link Bosnia and Herzegovina

Under Sopron

• Link Ignjat Sopron

Under the vilayet government

• Its subsequent directors were incompetent I think we had better say "not very capable", the present wording may be a bit too strong.
• Duplink: Principality of Serbia

No copyvio detected, sources fine, the text is very well written and the images suffice. That should be all. Good luck! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 17:35, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

Update: A bit busy now, I think I will be able to get to this only by the end of this week. Cheers! Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 18:43, 27 March 2016 (UTC)

@Sainsf: No prob, just notify me when you're ready. 23 editor (talk) 01:09, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

@23 editor: Read the article once again. The prose is very well-written, and I have no more comments. Please ping me when you are done with the points above; these done, I would be happy to pass the article. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 09:58, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

@Sainsf: I already dealt with all the points you brought up. 23 editor (talk) 12:51, 31 March 2016 (UTC)

Thank you... did not notice they were done. This is a great job, I am pleased to promote this. Sainsf <^>_{Feel at home} 12:56, 31 March 2016 (UTC)