Talk:Typhoons Louise and Marge

Latest comment: 3 years ago by SMB99thx in topic GA Review

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Reviewer: Hurricane Noah (talk · contribs) 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply


Doing. NoahTalk 01:04, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply

  • reconnaissance aircraft began probing the developing storm USAF I assume... I would also mention the unit involved.
@Hurricane Noah: There is no mention of USAF or any US military unit involved from the source, I consider any addition to be WP:OR.   Not done. SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • torm.[20][21][22].[23] Extra punctuation
  Done SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
  • valued in the millions of Philippine pesos I believe it should be "in" instead of "of"
  Done SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
Really isn't that much here to correct. NoahTalk 12:52, 9 December 2020 (UTC)Reply
It's finished. SMB99thx my edits! 02:43, 14 December 2020 (UTC)Reply