Talk:The Series Finale/GA1

Latest comment: 3 years ago by Favre1fan93 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)Reply

  • Remove the comma after "Wanda Maximoff's chaos magic".
  • Add a serial comma after "re-assembled" (American English).
  • Also remove the comma after "Maximoff's magic".
  • "survived development of the episode" – reword
  • Add hyphens between "fine tune" and "self acceptance".
  • "before beung changed" – typo
  • "labelling" → "labeling" (American English)
  • "eratic-looking" – typo
  • Add a comma after "In some instances".
  • "this episodes" – typo
  • "given freedom" → "given the freedom"
  • WP:RECEPTION: More reviews, less quotes.
  • "CHris Gridley" – typo
  • Be consistent with The Art of VFX and Art of VFX.
  • Mark references from Vanity Fair with "|url-access=limited".
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