Talk:The Boat Race 1931/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by The Rambling Man in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Tim riley (talk · contribs) 11:24, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
Comments
edit- Background
- "umpired by former Cambridge rower John Houghton Gibbon" – I have probably bleated before about the use of the false title in articles on British subjects – tabloidese, in my view. But this is hardly a point that stands in the way of promotion to GA.
- Avoided the false title. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:59, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
- "umpired by former Cambridge rower John Houghton Gibbon" – I have probably bleated before about the use of the false title in articles on British subjects – tabloidese, in my view. But this is hardly a point that stands in the way of promotion to GA.
- Race
- " his first push for ten strokes" – I got the general idea, but the precise meaning isn't clear to this layman. I assume it's a recognised technical term, and I don't seek any change.
- Added suitable link to glossary of terms. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:59, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
- "head wind" – the OED has this as one word
- Reflecting OED now. The Rambling Man (talk) 20:59, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
- " his first push for ten strokes" – I got the general idea, but the precise meaning isn't clear to this layman. I assume it's a recognised technical term, and I don't seek any change.
Nothing there to detain us (though please ponder nonetheless).
GA review summary
editGA review – see WP:WIAGA for criteria
- Is it reasonably well written?
- A. Prose quality:
- B. MoS compliance:
- Is it factually accurate and verifiable?
- A. References to sources:
- B. Citation of reliable sources where necessary:
- C. No original research:
- Is it broad in its coverage?
- A. Major aspects:
- B. Focused:
- Is it neutral?
- Fair representation without bias:
- Is it stable?
- No edit wars, etc:
- Does it contain images to illustrate the topic?
- A. Images are copyright tagged, and non-free images have fair use rationales:
- B. Images are provided where possible and appropriate, with suitable captions:
- Overall:
- Pass or Fail:
Another fine addition to a prodigious series of articles. – Tim riley talk 11:24, 3 April 2015 (UTC)
- Thank you. I've addressed your concerns and responded accordingly above. I very much appreciate your interest. All the best, The Rambling Man (talk) 20:59, 3 April 2015 (UTC)