Talk:The Boat Race 1904/GA1
Latest comment: 9 years ago by Ritchie333 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: Ritchie333 (talk · contribs) 17:36, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
Another boat race GA? Oh go on then
Lead
edit- Worth saying it was Cambridge's third win in a row here?
- Done. The Rambling Man (talk)
Background
edit- "Both boat club presidents, Monier-Williams and Edwards-Moss, were unable to row through injury" - I don't suppose we know anything more about this?
- Not according to my sources... The Rambling Man (talk) 21:27, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
Race
edit- "allowed Cambridge to reduce the deficit" - maybe "allowed Cambridge to catch up" would be better?
- Not seeing a reason for this other than personal preference. I think what I wrote is just fine. The Rambling Man (talk) 21:27, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
Summary
edit- I normally think I'm a hard taskmaster on GA reviews, but I don't think I've done one as short as this. If you keep this up, I'll be able to go through an article top to bottom and say "I can't see absolutely anything wrong or any alternatives - straight pass", which I've never done! Anyway, on hold for now. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 17:36, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
- Ok, thanks! The Rambling Man (talk) 21:27, 22 January 2015 (UTC)
- Ack, forgot about this - anyway, passed. Ritchie333 (talk) (cont) 16:48, 23 January 2015 (UTC)
- Ok, thanks! The Rambling Man (talk) 21:27, 22 January 2015 (UTC)