Talk:Te Lo Agradezco, Pero No
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Accolades
edit@My love is love:, you've been done a great of job writing of several Latin song articles. Thought I'd help by listing the accolades with source:
- 2008 Latin Billboard nomination for Hot Latin Song of the Year: Vocal Duet or Collaboration
- ASCAP Latin in the pop/ballad category
Cheers! Erick (talk) 17:02, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Magiciandude: Te lo agradezco muchisimo. I will make sure to add them to the article. My love is love 20:06, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
- Jaja, de nada! I'm always happy to help! ;) Erick (talk) 20:10, 15 June 2016 (UTC)
GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 21:15, 3 September 2017 (UTC)
Lead
edit- Instead of "English", you should write "Spanish:" to make clear that this is the original language of the title and song. Link it to Spanish language
- what nationalities are the Sanz and Shakira? State that they are singers
- for the former artist's eighth → for Sanz's eighth
- It was written by → The track was written by (alternation)
- The song came about after Shakira approached Sanz telling him that she wanted to collaborate on something different from her own material. → Is this about "La Tortura" or "Te Lo..."? If it's about "La Tortura", it can be removed as it's not relevant here
- and on the US → and on the American
- Unlink "music video" as it's a common term
Infobox
edit- I see "Remixes" on the cover, so I assume this was the artwork for a remixes EP. Is this the only cover that exists for this song? Anyway, please write a caption so that the readers are informed
- Cover also needs alternative text
- The genre and the recording time aren't referenced through the article's body, so they have to be removed
- Unlink Sanz as a composer
Background and release
edit- a close friend of Sanz was → comma after "Sanz"
- During an interview with Billboard, Sanz talked about the second time he collaborated with Shakira which was on "Te Lo Agradezco, Pero No", following the worldwide success of "La Tortura" from the former's album Fijación Oral, Vol. 1 (2005). He stated, "I hadn't dared → The recording marks the second time Sanz and Shakira collaborate after "La Tortura" from the latter's Fij... During a Billboard interview, he stated, ...
- he managed to do new things musically → he managed to expand his artistry by experimenting with new styles
- of the song featuring several remixes → featuring several remixes of the song
- Two remixes of the song were featured on the re-release of the album in 2007, El Tren de los Momentos: Edición Especial - one is by Luny Tunes and Tainy and the other one is dubbed "Benztown Mixdown" → Two remixes — the one done by Luny Tunes and the other one dubbed "Benztown Mixdown" — were included on...
- was also included on Sanz's → was also part of Sanz's
Reception
edit- Jason Birchmeier of the website → you can leave the "the website" part
- also highlighted the song as one of the best on the album, adding → also pointed out the track as one of the best on the record.
- was recognized as a Pop/Ballad of the Year → "the" instead of "a"
- later and in its fifth charting week, on 10 March 2007, it ascended to the top → later, and ascended to the top in its fifth charting week in March 2007.
- The single eventually spent → no "eventualy" needed
- Add "chart" after both Latin Pop Airplay and Tropical Songs
- it ranked as the 36th → it was ranked as the 36th
- US → spell out to "United States"
- topped the Top Latino → ...chart
- write "platinum" and "gold" in capital letters
- The certifications should be included in the lead as well
Music video
edit- Unlink "music video"
- on 11 January 2007. The clip for the song is a continuation of the one for Sanz's previous single → on 11 January 2007, acting as a continuation for the clip of Sanz's previous single
- Year of release in (brackets) after "A La..."
- where Alejandro Sanz dances → where Sanz is performing choreography
- was included on Sanz's → was also featured on Sanz's
- It received a nomination → The visual... (for alternation)
Live performances
edit- of the set list during → of the set list of
- The song was performed live by the duo → The song was further performed live...
- They performed it again at a humanitarian → Another appearance followed at a humanitarian
Track listings and formats
edit- Flawless ;)
Charts
edit- Fixed tables by myself for you
- You need a certification table for the single (take this as an example as it was also certified in Spain and Venezuela)
Other stuff
editCopy-violation
edit- 10.7% is super!
References
edit- As far as I checked them, the references do cover the assertations made in this article
Outcome
editThe article need a bit of work before I can pass it to GA. I put it On hold for 7 days. Good luck with editing and best regards, Cartoon network freak (talk) 17:04, 4 September 2017 (UTC)
- Thank you very much for the thorough review. All remarks are now Done. My love is love 18:54, 5 September 2017 (UTC)
- Gladly passing this! Congrats, Cartoon network freak (talk) 07:41, 6 September 2017 (UTC)
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