Talk:Tajikistan at the 2016 Summer Paralympics/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Courcelles (talk · contribs) 12:45, 10 November 2018 (UTC)

• I'll do these five over the next 24-48 hours. Courcelles (talk) 12:45, 10 November 2018 (UTC)

• "He was accompanied by chairman of" by the chairman
• Could use a comma after the chairman's name, I think.
• "handed a quota space" makes it sound like it was a gift, not something he had earned.
• How many total runners in the 100m race?

That's all from me. Courcelles (talk) 12:53, 10 November 2018 (UTC)

• @Courcelles: Have done all of the points raised above. MWright96 (talk) 13:37, 10 November 2018 (UTC)
  • very good, promoted. Courcelles (talk) 13:40, 10 November 2018 (UTC)