Talk:Supermarine Baby/GA1
Latest comment: 3 years ago by Amitchell125 in topic GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 20:56, 2 September 2021 (UTC)
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- Create redirect for the alt name at Supermarine N.1B Baby.
- Three para lead is too big for this modest article, suggest reduce to two.
- "Hargreaves’ biplane" His.
- "Limited in 1911 and bought" split the sentence here, it's rather bulky with a couple too many run-ons.
- "German Brandenburg aircraft" any kind of link?
- Lead "have a speed of 110 miles per hour (180 km/h), ", article "reach a speed of 95 knots (176 km/h; 109 mph) ", should be consistent.
- "fast and nimble" nimble, you mean manoeuvrable?
- "designs for the hull.[13] " overlinked.
- "issue of Flight magazine" link?
- "standard 'spotter' aircraft" what are they?
- 'boats of the Schneider Trophy.[23] The" overlinked.
- "post-World War I " First World War (for consistency).
- "1914 [25]" no space.
That's all I have. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 09:58, 3 September 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: All addressed, except the link for the Brandenburg aircraft. The sources I've got don't specify the aircraft, which makes it difficult to link, as no general Brandenburg article exists. See here for what I mean. If I find out more I'll add the correct link. Amitchell125 (talk) 14:38, 3 September 2021 (UTC)