Talk:St. Mary's High School (St. Louis)

Latest comment: 1 year ago by Spintendo in topic COI Edit Request
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Rewrite of History furnished

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I have followed the directions on the article page and furnished a complete rewrite of the History of the school. @Tom Danson: Jzsj (talk) 09:33, 30 December 2017 (UTC)Reply

COI Edit Request

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  • What I think should be changed (include citations):
  • Name - The school is now called St. Mary's South Side Catholic High School.
  • The intro is worded pretty bias-ly, and it's not archdiocesan anymore.
  • The infobox is lacking on citations, and also mentions that the school is archdiocesan.
  • The logo is outdated.
  • The 'History' section needs copy-editing, and is near-completely based on a biased, dead link. This is the current version of that page, but it's still biased.
  • It's stated on the page, but the 'Notable Alumni' section could use more citations and potentially more entries.
  • Why it should be changed: The article has been needing citations since 2010, and is generally in need of repair.

ItsThatLemon (talk) 15:31, 22 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

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Reply 22-SEP-2023

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   Clarification requested  

  • To expedite your request, it would help if you could provide the following information:
  1. Please state each specific desired change and accompanying reference in the form of verbatim statements which can then be added to the article (if approved) by the reviewer.
  2. The exact location where the desired claims are to be placed should be given.
  3. Exact, verbatim descriptions of any text and/or references to be removed should also be given.[1]
  4. Reasons should be provided for each change.[2]
  • In the section of text below titled Sample edit request, the four required items are shown as an example:
Sample edit request

1. Please remove the third sentence from the second paragraph of the Sun section:

"The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 25 miles in length."



2. Please add the following claim as the third sentence of the second paragraph of the Sun section:

"The Sun's diameter is estimated to be approximately 864,337 miles in length."



3. Using as the reference:

Prisha Harinath (2023). The Sun. Academic Press. p. 1.



4. Reason for change being made:

"The previously given diameter was incorrect."
  • Kindly open a new edit request at your earliest convenience when ready to proceed with your request.
  • Additionally:
  1. The logo that you wish to display in the article first needs to be uploaded to Wikipedia before it can be added to the article. Please use the File Upload Wizard to accomplish this, taking care to select "Upload file for Non-Free Use". Once the logo is uploaded with the correct non-free-use license and approved, kindly return to this talk page and open a new edit request.
  2. Finally, requests to change an article's title should be submitted using the {{requested move}} template specifically as a controversial move request process requiring discussion amongst the wider community.

Thank you!
Regards,  Spintendo  18:18, 22 September 2023 (UTC)Reply

References

  1. ^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: Describe the requested changes in detail. This includes the exact proposed wording of the new material, the exact proposed location for it, and an explicit description of any wording to be removed, including removal for any substitution.
  2. ^ "Template:Edit COI". Wikipedia. 30 August 2023. Instructions for Submitters: If the rationale for a change is not obvious (particularly for proposed deletions), explain.