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Latest comment: 8 years ago by The Anome in topic Needs copyediting for tone
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Needs copyediting for tone
This is a great idea, and the company is to be commended for what it's doing -- making money and doing a major social good at once is awesome -- but the article reads like it was written by their PR agency. Could we please tone down the purple prose? -- The Anome (talk) 18:04, 27 September 2016 (UTC)