Talk:Spencer Heath (baseball)

Latest comment: 3 years ago by MWright96 in topic GA Review

GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:Spencer Heath (baseball)/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 20:30, 2 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

Am reviewing for the July 2021 GAN Backlog Drive MWright96 (talk) 20:30, 2 July 2021 (UTC)Reply

  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose):   b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):  
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section):   b (citations to reliable sources):   c (OR):  
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects):   b (focused):  
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:  
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:  
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):   b (appropriate use with suitable captions):  
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:  

Lead

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  • "Spencer Paul Heath, Jr." - problem relating to MOS:JR here
  • Heath's nationality will need to be mentioned in the first paragraph of the lead
  • "Listed at 6'0", 170 lb.," - the convert template will be better off used on these figures
  • Think the lead can be expanded with further details of Heath's playing career

Early life

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  • "Spencer Paul Heath, Jr.," - MOS:JR problem here
  • "Spencer Heath, Sr.," - same as above
  • "Well-known around Chicago for his skills in semipro baseball," - semi-professional

Winnipeg Maroons (1919)

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  • Winning percentage would be better off wikilinked to the appropriate article for non-baseball readers

Chicago White Sox (1920)

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  • "Baseball historian Frank Russo points out that this was difficult," - the text in bold is informal; a word such as noted is more appropriate in this instance
  • The term inning can be wikilinked to its article only on the first mention

Later years

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  • "Heath returned to playing semipro ball after his time with the White Sox." - semi-professional baseball

Will put the review on hold to enable the nominator to address or query the points raised above MWright96 (talk) 21:14, 2 July 2021 (UTC)Reply