Talk:Speak Now World Tour/GA1

Latest comment: 1 month ago by Ippantekina in topic GA Review

GA Review

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Nominator: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 10:16, 8 June 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Brachy0008 (talk · contribs) 01:45, 26 July 2024 (UTC) Drop everything now. Because everybody's favourite GA reviewer is here![citation needed] Will this review be the best thing that's ever been mine? Will the story of this review end soon? It all depends on the nominator, lol. But one thing's for sure, I won't be drunk and grumbling about the quality of article? But anyways, good luck, cos I see sparks fly whenever I see this article.Reply

@Ippantekina i got my points presented for you… =D brachy08 (chat here lol) 08:23, 3 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks, I'll get to them shortly. Ippantekina (talk) 08:36, 4 September 2024 (UTC)Reply

Copyvois

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Violation unlikely (35.8%). But I managed to see some copyvios though, so here they are:

  • Paraphrase keen understanding of what fuels fan obsession in the first place: a desire for intimacy between singer and listener

Image review

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  • Taylor Swift (6820735620).jpg is clear, but TayTay is in a bad angle.

Source review

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Lead

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  • FN 1: Formatting is a bit werid. Also why is there an information for the value of the box office value in "2023 dollars"?

Background and development

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  • FN 10: No mention of Singapore.
  • FN 12: Not archived.
  • FN 13, 15-16, 18-20: Are they reliable?
ill let them pass brachy08 (chat here lol) 04:05, 10 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • FN 14 is unreliable.
  • a bit… confused by that statement

Concert synopsis

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  • FN 21 may not be reliable.
alr… ill let it pass brachy08 (chat here lol) 04:05, 10 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • What does FN 19, 27-28 say?
  • What does FN 32 say?
  • FN 36: Unarchived, speaks NOT about the B-stage
alr thanks for the clarification brachy08 (chat here lol) 04:06, 10 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
  • FN 35: It says Video screens contrasted photos of Swift’s musicians at age 15 and now. No mention of Swift.

Alterations

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  • FN 42: Mentions Fifteen being in the main set in place of Last Kiss, something not in the section.
  • FN 47: Does not mention Safe and Sound being part of the setlist.
  • FN 52: No mention of tributes.
got it brachy08 (chat here lol) 00:02, 13 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
I think I've addressed all of your points :) Ippantekina (talk) 08:50, 17 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
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