Talk:Sonja Mejcher-Atassi

Latest comment: 10 days ago by Munfarid1 in topic Needs more copyediting

Needs more copyediting

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Hello, @AbirWard: I have just done some first copyediting, but this article needs further editing. Most of all, the list of publications with information on their contents should be rewritten as continuing text, highlighting the most important content, always based on secondary sources. Further, the text on An Impossible Friendship: Group Portrait, Jerusalem Before and After 1948 is a violation of copyright. I suggest you rewrite the description including the ideas of the quote, that is too long. As the same publications appear in the following list, they should not be used as captions in the preceding text about her career, but only in a concise way in descriptive text. Munfarid1 (talk) 10:20, 27 July 2024 (UTC)Reply