Talk:Sometime Samurai/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:29, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

I will go through this completely today! --K. Peake 07:29, 28 August 2023 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):

   b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a. (reference section):

   b. (citations to reliable sources):

   c. (OR):

   d. (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a. (major aspects):

   b. (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):

   b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/fail:

(Criteria marked are unassessed)

Infobox and lead

• Infobox looks good!
• "for Tei's studio album" → "for Tei's fifth studio album,"
• "It was originally recorded as" → "The song was originally recorded as"
• "The track remained unfinished for" → "It remained unfinished for"
• For consistency, only use the song instead of the track
• "In "Sometime Samurai", a" → "In it, a"
• Mention the ceremony separately from the MTV Award's name and wikilink it too
• "Tei played "Sometime Samurai" during" → "Tei played the song during"

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Background and recording

• First para looks good!
• "Despite the smooth collaboration" should either use the plural collaborations or collaboration process
• "Scotland, and the UK." → "Scotland and the UK." unless the comma is a rule in Japanese
• The word either is not used by the source
• "for three hours." → "for around three hours."

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Production and composition

• Img looks good!
• ""Sometime Samurai" is a" → "Musically, "Sometime Samurai" is a" but where are these genres sourced?

Tei said the song is rock to him and Grunebaum noted its house beat. Damian Vo (talk) 15:48, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

• Pipe Japanese Curry to Japanese curry
• "Wave era," highlighting its" → "Wave era", highlighting its" per MOS:QUOTE
• Lowercase the Knacks per MOS:THEMUSIC
• "mark the first inclusion" → "marked the first inclusion"
• "of "Sometime Samurai," Tei" → "of "Sometime Samurai", Tei"
• "with the line" → "with the lyrics,"
• "drew a comparison" shouldn't this info all be present tense per it being a book?
• "Baker further suggested that" → "He further suggested that"

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Release and promotion

• "In November, remixes of" → "In November 2005, remixes of"
• No reviews to be added?

Those two reviews are the only sources I could find since SM is only a promo single in Japan, and Tei did not release Flash in the US. Damian Vo (talk) 15:18, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

• Img looks good!
• Shouldn't the author review use present tense?
• "from February to May." → "from February to May 2005." per this being a new para
• Rest soon; sorry I don't have the time to finish today.

Thank you so much for reviewing this. I addressed the issues you mentioned above. There is no rush on this, so please take your time :D Damian Vo (talk) 15:34, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

That is fine, I am glad you understood me moving the remainder of this review to today! --K. Peake 18:24, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

• Wikilink music video
• Baring in mind WP:TVPLOT, could you not add more info that you know about the video?

Sadly the only "legit" reference about the video I could find is Andrew's, which is 2 sentences long. Damian Vo (talk) 01:45, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• "Minogue did not appear" → "Minogue does not appear"
• Again, should comma be used before "and" in Japanese?
• "of "GBI (German Bold Italic)," and" → "of "GBI (German Bold Italic)", and" plus mention it was staff for those reviews
• The source does not mention The O2 Arena

The O2 Arena is mentioned on the front cover artwork of the DVD, hence the media note. Damian Vo (talk) 01:45, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Formats and track listings

• Good

Credits and personnel

• Good

Notes

• views the lyrics → views the line
• "depicts her lover as "an urban Buddhist punk."" → "depicting her lover as "an urban Buddhist punk"." per MOS:QUOTE

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

References

• Copyvio score checks out at 27.5%!!

Websites

• Cite news.com.au as publisher instead
• Pipe Warner Music Japan to Warner Music Group
• Pipe Tower Records Japan to Tower Records
• Fix MOS:CAPS issues with "Guest: TOWA TEI"

Done. Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

Print sources

• Good

Media notes

• Good

Final comments and verdict

•  On hold until all of the issues are fixed; this is now done on time! --K. Peake 18:24, 29 August 2023 (UTC)

I believe I have addressed all your comments. Thanks again for reviewing yet another one of my articles! Damian Vo (talk) 01:56, 30 August 2023 (UTC)

• ✓ Pass now, there was one ref misformatted that I forgot but I fixed the capitals issue now! --K. Peake 18:55, 31 August 2023 (UTC)

Thank you so much! Good luck with the Backlog Drive this month! Damian Vo (talk) 02:41, 1 September 2023 (UTC)