Talk:Social emergency medicine
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editHello Wikipedians! My plan for editing this page includes expanding the lead and adding sections for scope, testing/screening, and interventions. The timeline for this will be first edits over the next week, all sections in their initial state in the next two weeks, and final edits by Dec 21. Thanks in advance for any feedback/collaboration. Owens-Campbell (talk) 03:43, 6 December 2018 (UTC)
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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 26 November 2018 and 21 December 2018. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Owens-Campbell. Peer reviewers: Nikopants.
Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 03:38, 18 January 2022 (UTC)
Peer Review - Nikopants
editOverall impression: Very succinct lead. Really great job both explaining the vast reach of social em and differentiating it from related fields in the scope section. The examples you provided in the screenings section are great. I got the impression that this would be a great read for the type of people who might currently hear the phrase "social EM" and immediately google it (so mostly trainees in the health profession) and for that purpose I think it succeeds in satiating curiosity.
Suggested changes/ things to address: -uncapitalized emergency department in the scope section -add links to the scope section -use a more accessible synonym to burgeoning in the history section -remove = in the listed programs part of training section -clarify what SBIRT is -Overall organization is great but perhaps the screening section could come just after scope? I feel there is a natural desire for those who would seek this page to want an example of what it is before hearing about its history. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Nikopants (talk • contribs) 02:28, 17 December 2018 (UTC)