Talk:Simon Stuart (general)

Latest comment: 20 days ago by Sturmvogel 66 in topic GA Review

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I would like to see a page for Dr Simon Stuart, a prominent conservationist. I think we need to make this a disambiguation page and move the existing paje to a new one: Simon_Stuart_(Australian_Military) or similar. Any objection? — Preceding unsigned comment added by Cmbird1 (talkcontribs) 10:11, 11 June 2020 (UTC)Reply

GA Review

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Nominator: Nford24 (talk · contribs) 18:13, 14 July 2024 (UTC)Reply

Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 07:51, 6 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

I'll get to this shortly--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 07:51, 6 August 2024 (UTC)Reply

  • Images properly licensed
  • The lede is awfully short
  • What's Land Capability?
  • Force Commander Is this Australian terminology? It reads oddly and I'd suggest changing it to commanding officer or similar
  • Are there articles for Ferguson, Williams and Thompson? And for the Enhanced Land Force Programme?--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 08:23, 30 August 2024 (UTC)Reply
Thanks Sturmvogel 66, I'll get to work on he lede.
What's Land Capability? It's the capability development program used in all three branches of the ADF (for their specific battlefield scope). It's essentially being responsible for modernising the army equipment wise.
This needs to be explained in the article--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:23, 27 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
Force Commander is an American term, though usually associated with multi-national force elements, in this case specifically the Multinational Force and Observers.
Huh, never heard of it before, but I never served with the MFO.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 22:14, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply
I can certainly create articles for those three. Nford24 (PE121 Personnel Request Form) 22:03, 8 September 2024 (UTC)Reply