Talk:Shimon Gershon

Latest comment: 16 years ago by Monkey dog2088 in topic improper sentence to start an article with

improper sentence to start an article with

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i refer to:

"after the move Hapoel Fans gave the nickname Boged ("traitor")".

This was written, very prominently and at the very start, and besides the offensive nature of these words towards the man, it gave the article a very biased, even violent tone right at the start. I changed that, and elaborated further regarding the circumstances of his departure from Hapoel Tel Aviv.

Monkey dog2088 (talk) 20:18, 26 July 2008 (UTC)Reply